Help me with this page please

[jsnook]

Hi,

I created this page using the toolbox. What do I need to do to make it work?
I think it is cute in a corny way, but don't know if anyone else would think so.

http://www.tetoolbox.com/splash/4234/

[msbeejay]

Hi,

I created this page using the toolbox. What do I need to do to make it work?
I think it is cute in a corny way, but don't know if anyone else would think so.

http://www.tetoolbox.com/splash/4234/


Hi John, the picture is oversized which gives it an
out of focus look and also "generatOr" is misspelled...

If you reduced the entire Splash Page, perhaps it would look better!?

msbeejay

[jsnook]

Thanks, I will try that.

[revjoybunny]

Hi if you made the box smaller it would look better over all and you could try making the link to click a little larger if the box goes smaller you will lose the link as it wont be prominent enough. Also then you will be able to see the logo with your face on it.

I think its to the point though you could put a line of text in saying how much it costs if anything to join and perhaps one other great benifit you cant live without :)

[msbeejay]

I agree with Rev Joy...You want to draw your viewers'
attention to the content rather than the image...

Play around some more, you will come up with the ideal solution!

For example here's what I came up with (image is reduce 50% and positioned to the right)

Mr. Policeman says (Arial, size 20)

STOP (Cooper Black, embossed, color red, size 36)

Wasting Your (<-Arial, size 26 &
Cooper Black, embossed, color green, size 36 ->) $$$$$

Check Out (Arial, size 36)

“Ads Cash Generator” (Arial, size 36)

Click Here Money Back +25% more (http://www.tetoolbox.com/click/4234/forums.startxchange.com/http://asdcashgenerator.com/?ref=24915) (Arial Black, size 18)



I can email it to you ... I used MSN Word.

msbeejay